The Moon!
If i had the opportunity to visit the moon i would totally go. Explore everything there is to know about the moon. It would be a great opportunity to face my fear of heights. I would like to visit it for the reason that i would want to float while up their. I would also want to see everything from up there and take a look how the night looks and see all the stars. And in the day see how the moon hides and lets the sun come out.
Capitalize your "I's"
ReplyDelete'their' -- "there"
' and take a look how the night looks' rephrase.