Thursday, September 9, 2010

favorite season

Every season has a differnt type of weather, from hot to cold. my favorite season is the summer. durring the summer i love going bike riding to the beach on my beach cruiser and feeking the hot air and getting that perfect tan. i also enjoy the suamer for the fact that i get to wear shorts which are my favorite qnd going to the beach with my friends. another great thing about the summer is that we dont attend school since we are in vacation so everyday were out with our friends having fun and finding new adventures and memories to create
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2 comments:

  1. cherishSeptember 15, 2010 at 11:21 AM

    summer is ok but winter is better because of christmas.

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  2. AliceSeptember 19, 2010 at 6:59 PM

    Interesting, but the errors are a distracting. Basic grammar is crucial. Capitalization and verb tense seem to be the only problem. Next time, try to refrain from such bad usage.
    Other than that, continue writing. :)

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